Posted by: class3user | March 12, 2008

me as abel

1882 June

                           Wednesday

I saw that Hatty was just about to climb the wall so I pulled the Bible out of my pocket and pushed Hatty down on the floor until she was on her hands and knees,

“Hatty swear on the Bible that you will never ever climb that wall” I said. In the end I made Hatty swear, so I put the Bible back in my pocket and I walked away.

                           Thursday

A bright summer’s day, I went out picking the delicious red strawberries putting each one into the trug. Suddenly my world changed into shock horror, I heard a crackle and then Hatty screamed so loud I thought that thunder was going to strike any second. I ran towards the sun dial, I saw Hatty sitting there with a trickle of blood peeping down her forehead and splodges of blood on her apron I went to help her I took her back into the house and I actually saw Tom, “Go away; you’re just a devil from hell. Just leave this place,” I shouted furiously to Tom then I just walked away without another word.

             By Leia

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Leia your writing really is exciting! You make me want to know what is going to happen next!
Thank you for all the tingles we get when we read your work!

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