Posted by: class3user | March 12, 2008

Dead or alive?

I was in the garden putting the strawberry nets on the strawberry beds when I suddenly heard a crack! So I ran to try to find out what was going on and then I heard a slight squeal of fright; so I began to speed up my running. Then I heard a scream so I sprinted as fast as I could. I finally found where the noises were coming from. I saw Hatty lying on the ground with blood dripping from her forehead and she had a bloodstain on her pinafore. I thought I should move her so I picked her up and began to take her inside. The boy followed so I shouted “Get gone, get gone!” and I called him the “devil boy”. Was Hatty dead or alive?

By Connor

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Connor… i love the way how you used the word sprinted, and i love the detail of the writing, it make’s it feel so real, other than a story. I had alway’s known that your writing is great…

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